Please let Andy keep the light swords they would be so freakin awesome. Also please please please more one shots i love these, i know about being oerworked and i'm asking a lot but i love your work and art style and just really want to see more. Keep up the good work and i hope you find profit in this endeavor, financially or otherwise.
Looks interesting, I hope you still give us the humorous bomango as well I love it also maybe because we haven't seen a rigid plot to begin with the characters seem so flexible, and can be adapted to almost any setting.
The contradiction of colors and attitudes is a nice detail. Its good to let your audience know who the hero is and the villain as well. A well established design achieves this, but color always adds that extra "zing". Good work on this piece, i hope to see you continue to improve your art as time passes.
I honestly believe this cannot. Fail you've already created dynamic characters which we all know and love all that remains is for you to create circumstances in which we get to see who they are and how the grow and their interpersonal relationships evolve.( Kinda like Breaking Bad or Walking Dead) I am so looking forward to this. Take your time because, once it out there its out there. But I know it'll be good. Wish you all the best.